It wa sunny and warm yesterday morning.
(was是不是打錯了？）
正確：It was sunny and warm yesterday morning.
I decided to go shopping, but it had started to rain on the way.
(前面可以再加一個so，表達因為天氣好，所以我決定去逛街。）
(句中不用加had，started to rain 就可以了。）
正確：So I decided to go shopping, but it started to rain on the way.
I didn't have an umbrella, so I had to rum my home.
(run打錯了吧？）
(run my home中間要加back to 喔～）
正確：I didn't have an umbrella, so I had to run back to my home.
Because I got wet in the rain, I had a serious fever.
Yesterday was not my day!
(片語用得不錯～）
How poor I was!
如果是我寫作文的話，我會這樣寫，參考看看吧～
It was a glorious day when the sun shone into my room.
I was in a good mood, so I decided to take a walk.
I strolled down the street while whistling.
Suddenly, the sky became dark and gray.
The next second, it begun to rain.
I rushed home without an umbrella.
When I was home, I had a serious headache.
Then I realized, I have a fever!
So I had to lie on the bed for the rest of the day.
Today was not my day!
以上只是參考就好了～至於你會拿幾分，這也不一定噢～
因為每個評審老師的觀點都不同，欣賞的地方也會不同。
所以有時候也要碰運氣囉～但是可以把文法，拼字，內容都寫到最好。
這樣分數是絕對不會低的！
BY : Ter****** XDDDD
P.S.如果我不是最佳解答的話，可不可以麻煩通知我一下～我會移掉答案的～
謝謝配合噢～～～＾＾有疑問的話，歡迎再問我～喔喔～
參考資料 ter******的知識噢～～～＾＾
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