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＊這是由看圖寫做寫成的文章,題目給的敘述如下
1.我和同學相約去看KTV來展開週末假期
2.約翰提到他唱歌很厲害,但我們都很懷疑,因為他平常就愛吹牛
3.第一首就是約翰的歌,結果他一開口唱歌,我們才發現他唱的五音不全
4.約翰真的是個名副其實的吹牛大王

＊我們老師有幾項規定不能犯的錯誤
1.詞性變化
2.連接詞

＊內容以我能達到的程度寫作,所以題目敘述供參考,
大同小異即可,不用改的很厲害的文章;
但請幫我看看整篇文章有沒有什麼錯誤之處
感謝 感謝~~~

Finally , the class is finish and weekend is coming. My classmates and I decide to open up our weekend by hold a party at KTV. John , one of my classmates , mention that he is a man of genius in singing. In addition , he says that his skill can compare with professional singer. Because he likes to boast ordinary , all of us are doubt about what he had said.

Arrive in KTV , John takes the remote control in a hurry. Therefore , the first one is his song. John holds the microphone excitedly while he is singing. But the truth is , his voice is so terrible that we can't listen anymore. As a result of the dreadful experience , we confirm that John is a truly brag.